P5

Evaluation

I was given quite a lot of feedback, most of it was curbing my ideas for what is necessary and the rest of it was more about layout rather than anything else. Most of what was wrong with my script was the section about what Steve was doing before Nigel walked in. Another problem was punctuation but that can be fixed easily by taking more time.

If I were to redo this I would sift through my ideas and not add all of the ones I can merely add the relevant ones. I would also try to keep certain ideas to a tamer version.