October 2018 Half-Term Work
Over the half term break in October 2018, we were tasked to write a 5-page script using wheels to give us ideas. These wheels told us the job, physical distinguishments and what personality our characters had. This was the result. Not too proud of the ending on the fifth page/end of the fourth page. I personally feel the last part was a little rushed or more accurately wasn't properly thought through.
Here is the script.
Self Evaluation:
I believe that my grammar could have been better. That's the first thing I was able to pick up on when re-reading this script. Another thing I could have done would have been to introduce more characters with lines, maybe even have a flashback of a time with James's wife and daughter that were mentioned. The action sequence with the bear should have either been a point where one of the characters got injured or to have been a point which lasted longer, if not both.
Here is the script.
I believe that my grammar could have been better. That's the first thing I was able to pick up on when re-reading this script. Another thing I could have done would have been to introduce more characters with lines, maybe even have a flashback of a time with James's wife and daughter that were mentioned. The action sequence with the bear should have either been a point where one of the characters got injured or to have been a point which lasted longer, if not both.
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